This particular critique was very important because it was my midterm drawing. Our assignment was to do 2 point perspective with cross hatched shading. It also included the use of organizational line. The feedback I received was that I still need to work on making sure my lines go to the right points. And my cross hatching needed to in different directions for a more realistic picture. As we continue to work on perspective and shading, I’m sure mine will improve little by little.